
Paint Your Palette
June 10, 2010I want to thank Jingle because she has given me this award to decorate my blog even more…. She is indeed a very good friend and a gem to have. I am posting this poem today. I wrote this about a week ago. I know this should have been posted right away, but I wanted to wait until I did not have any personal issues anymore. Today just seems to be the perfect time to post this. I hope this satisfies you all, my talented friends. It’s a free verse, so there’s really no formal count or anything. *wink*
Paint Your Palette
If you were a color, what would you be?
Which color would show what you mean to me?
I could say that you’re the color yellow,
A bright sunshine with a golden halo.
A color that brightens up my whole sky,
Like the sun, with each day that passes by.
Yet you are the orange of a sunset,
Like what happens when we hit the reset.
You represent the end of one long day
And promise a new one is on its way.
I could say you are red, burning with fire,
Full of passion, of love, or even ire.
You burn me with a heat that’s so intense
There’s not much any room left for pretense.
You are the color of life; you are green.
All things are better than they’ve ever been.
You have breathed life into my lifeless soul;
You have made all parts of me become whole.
You are like the Earth; you;re my only home.
When I am with you, there’s no need to roam.
You are blue as the seas and oceans are,
As blue as the sky I see from afar.
Like an oasis in the desert lands,
You quench those who thirst and soothe their rough hands.
You are the rainbow that complete my sky;
I know I shall but love you by and by.
The colors that you bring my whole life through,
They are yellow, orange, red, green, and blue.
WOW…the colors of YOU…I adore this..well done, Isha..been missing you, my lovely friend.
stay blessed and whatever personal issues you may have, remember, you are never alone…
hugs
shakira
Oh, just want to tell you that I took sometime off blogging as my daughter , Jasmine and I have some health issues.
I am still recovering…take care of you, love.
you are never too far from my mind.
hugs
shakira
lovely words about colors..
thank you for playing…
we have so many fresh and new participants.
please feel free to visit them,
we have an increase in number of comments, which requires 18 comments for poets…
not a problem, Ji… I’ll be completing the 18 by tomorrow… i’d probably do more if I still have time… I have to sleep now, though because it’s already midnight here in the Phils… *winK*
what a romantic tribute to love! this is so inspiring =)
love all the colors you used…and the sentiment behind them…nic.e
Ishabella, I simply love the way you used colors to describe love, it is indeed inspiring, and congratulation on your awards.
Hi sweetie, I have a new post.
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Gorgeous poem Ishabelle. What colour would you be? I’d be browns of the earth and green of the pines, and the purples of the heather of my homeland. So multicoloured just like you 😉
a well written poem dear, your best yet in my humble opinion, glad u are writing again xx
You have breathed life into my lifeless soul;
You have made all parts of me become whole.
Very nice!
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
What a lovely poem. Thank you. I really like the colors matching the moods.
thank you for the great efforts.
Happy Friday!
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beautiful colors..enjoyable read!
You are simply awesome ishabelle, you painted the rainbow in this poem. Just gorgeous. I was missing your poems so much.
congratulations for the well deserved award.
have a beautiful weekend.
lots of love.
You paint with an array of colors about color itself. Clever and well written.
cheers
BTW-good to see you’re back to blogging 🙂
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the title is catchy , the poem is lovely , well done.
Wow…everybody will fall for such sweet words. Beautiful poem. really beautiful…and the rhyming was great…Cheers.
You have painted a beautiful rainbow of love and friendship…..bkm
hmm- so much colours- tq for reminding me of one of my earlier posting “is the colour I see”! is it? cant really remember the title haha!
You represent the end of one long day
And promise a new one is on its way….lovely poem…i just love the play of colors and words:)great job
Such a colourful poem…simply loved it:)
It’s beautiful and colourful 😀
emotions well portrayed.;)
clear in the soul. 🙂
rock on!!
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a beautiful poem… loved the imagery and the colors you have painted with your words 🙂
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
beautiful
Wonderful work,and well done.
btw…green is my favorite color.
Just Say’n
Beautiful heartfelt and tender poetry. Loved every line.
Joanny
Please return favors to poets who were here for you…
visit some fresh poets when time allows.
Thank you in advance!
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wow…I do like this piece of masterpiece!! thanks!!!
Nice work! I love you analogies~
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