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Fever

July 29, 2010

The spirit is so much willing,
But the body’s not cooperating.
I try so hard to feel alive;
I try appearing to have such drive.

I want to always jump up and down
To life my spirits from the ground.
But I feel tired and beaten inside,
The exhaustion’s hard to hide.

My head aches; my nose hurts as well.
In sickness, I pitifully fell.
When will I be healthy again?
When will my sickness ever end?

My body is burning like fire;
My mind is caught in a haywire.
I think I need to get some sleep,
So I can bounce back frm the deep.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I want to write this for tomorrow’s rally in Jingle’s blog. I hope to see the usual people again. I have been absent from the online world, but I am really going online for this. *wink*

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29 comments

  1. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/02/the-perfect-poet-award-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-24/

    an award has been there for you…
    πŸ˜‰


  2. I can take your entry for Rally week 25,
    which will remain open until next Rally,

    sorry for being absent,
    I can link you in,
    then you do the visit,
    then I will marked you down and you are fine…
    Triple cheers to see you write and post.
    πŸ˜‰


  3. rest well,
    your poem is very vivid and vibrating,…
    keep shining!
    πŸ˜‰


  4. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/23/the-perfect-poet-award-week-25/

    you win in this link I believe,
    relax,

    have fun!


    • not sure if you want to take this award or not,
      there are still time,
      hope to see you soon!
      take good care.
      Cheers!
      πŸ˜‰


  5. I enjoyed this one, πŸ™‚
    Peace to you,
    Laz


  6. I love reading your posts… You speak your mind. I hope you get well soon!


  7. i like readin this post


  8. another great poem, ishabelle


  9. I read it and the song “you give me fever” is now stuck in my head! Love it and feel better


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  11. cute..


  12. we all need rest, hope you are doing great by now. lovely poem πŸ™‚


  13. Very clearly put.


  14. This was really good. Nice job.


  15. Ah I can relate perfectly to what this poem means =] I’ve felt like that many a time and you express it really well


  16. I’ve never heard a fever described in such an elegant way. Great work!


  17. Brilliant work keep it up !! πŸ™‚


  18. really nice work – love the second verse!


  19. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/11/thursday-poets-rally-week-26-august-12-18/

    how are you?
    in case you want to attend Rally week 26, welcome in.
    πŸ™‚


  20. I nominate you as perfect poet! πŸ™‚


  21. Sometimes ordinary fever is crippling. Can experience it in your verse.


  22. Hope all is well by now….
    good write up…
    viva la vida πŸ™‚


  23. Great poem my friend xxxx


  24. hey! its been ages since i last dropped in here, seems you too have not been around too much.

    i know the fever is gone by now, hope your spirit is soaring high.

    take care.


  25. Those irritating fevers really suck!! Body ache, runny nose, burning eyes…grrrrr
    You have described it so perfectly, Ishabelle!!!! WOW!!!
    I hope you are very well by now… and I REALLY hope these fevers don’t bother you much!

    Many hugs, my dear friend..



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