High Altitudes
March 4, 2010I decided to write a short poem for today. I hope you guys still enjoy it.
Words aren’t any good right now;
Everything’s just emotions burning.
I have lost all sense of thought, somehow;
I can see them all leaving.
It’s all a sad and tragic fate
With nothing left to do but wait.
Nothing else left to feel but hate.
Why can’t anyone get it straight?
It’s all of no use, and my head aches;
I’ve got nothing else left to say.
Knowing this, my heart beats and breaks;
There’s no one to take these hurts away.
I would also like to pass on this award to the 12 poets listed below… Please check out their blogs as well. I assure you that you won’t regret it. These people have written great poetry as well. I am giving them this award for all the time and effort they have put into creating beautiful pieces of literature.
1. Fiveloaf http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com
2. Brian MIller http://www.waystationone.com
3. Jamie Funster http://www.janniefunster.com
4. Beth http://doubtfulpoet.wordpress.com/
5. Kseverny http://kseverny.wordpress.com
6. Shakira justmeshakirack.blogspot.com
7. Wordwand http://wordwand.wordpress.com/
8. Datsme http://justthinkingloud.wordpress.com/
9. Steve http://gargoylesroost.wordpress.com
10. Gerarding Baugh http://gerardinebaugh.wordpress.com
11. The Good Doctor http://drj3kyll.wordpress.com
12. Gavroche http://thinkinlikegavroche.wordpress.com
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When words fail you, write a poem! 🙂
thanks for your comment, daniel… i agree, poetry makes you express things which are normally hard to say…
Dearest Ishabelle,
You are definitely one of my favorites!
I love your poem, again, such raw passion
and feelings that I can identify with.
Words are meant to be understandable
and I like that you keeps your words simple
yet you make them means more by the way
you use them.
Kudos, Ishabelle.
Again, I am humbled for the honor.
Thank you so much.
I do accept with honor.
hugs
shakira
i am truly glad you enjoyed the poem, shakira… 🙂 i hope you enjoyed the award… 🙂
thanks a lot , you are so generous.a lovely award , I ll share it with some of my firends.
you deserve it… 🙂
th eifrst commentor nailed it…when words fail make it a poem…i wish someone could take that pain away though. smiles. thank you for the award!
you’re welcome, brian… 🙂 i sure hope that you enjoyed the award… 🙂
thank you ishabelle for this honour to share- guess i will also add you into my blogroll..
thanks, fiveloaf… it is an honor
I like your poem. It is honest and brave. I have a Jingle Jangle award for you at my blog.
i am glad that you liked my poem, suzicate… thanks for the award… 🙂
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I am glad that u pick this one,
very beautiful to see it!
thanks much, Jingle… 🙂 i picked this award because i liked the graphics… 🙂
Please remind the poets who get it that this homecoming award is to keep, not to pass around freely, we do it for poets who are previous participants only…not poets in general!
thank U.
sure, i will tell them it is for them to keep/// 🙂
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emotions have been so beautifully expressed…
well written…
im glad you found it well-written, rajlakshmi… 🙂
got an award for you in my blog 🙂
aw, thank you so much… 🙂 this really cheers me up
I have a homecoming award for you
http://nohaemile.wordpress.com/2010/03/04/lost-messages/
You can keep this beautiful one, It’s a one time award to honor the Rally Poets
Enjoy 🙂
thank you, noha… 🙂 im so honored
we all feel like that once in a while 🙂
loved the poem and could relate to it perfectly.
i agree with you, trisha… 🙂 thank god we only feel that once in a while… 🙂
you’re poems are always so expressive.
thanks for the award
i hope you enjoyed the award… 🙂
Ah-ha, little Isha…but there IS someone to take those hurts away. You prove that, in and of yourself! Thank you for your beautiful poetry and thoughtful heart. 🙂
hahaha… u really are a good doctor… 🙂 im glad you found the poem beautiful…
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/04/forever-friends-award-and-poetry-award/
an award 4 u.
yay!!! you are so kind, jingle
Poetry is birthed in all of our emotions and thoughts, our experiences, and you alone have a unique voice and story to share … no matter what your journey through each day brings, something is worthwhile in your creativity, even if that means being silent for a time, to feel, to go through in order to find your way back to who you are … and in that, perhaps, you find something to share. Keep writing!!
you have such wise words, purple… thank you for your comment… 🙂
The 90 seconds that last forever…waiting for emotions to run their course.
yup… it is indeed breath-stopping… not knowing what to say or do next….
I have a small award for you, please collect it from my blog: http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/best-blog-award/ and make me very, very happy.
With warmest wishes,
thank you so much trisha… i feel really honored with your awards… 🙂
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I could feel the pain and hurt.
ahahaha… glad that the poem was raw enough for you to feel the emotions
Ow Isha, I’d take half the burden gladly, if it meant you could smile and be happy 🙂 Thanks so muchxx
aehehe.. that’s so sweet of you beth.. thankies… 😀
Ahhh, thank you so much Ishabelle!!
Beautiful award and poem. I have so many amazing awards from you all. THANK YOU!!
im glad you are having fun, jannie…. 🙂
tq ishabelle- i decided to award you with the Happy Moments Cross Cultures Poetry Award- details at my blog.. decided to add you into my blogroll too- enjoy!
thanks much, fiveloaf
Very nice poem. Thanks
thanks dustus… im glad you think it is a nice poem… 🙂
read it again. the emotion stuck with me again on second read.
the other side,,ouch!!